Night of the Scorpion
Chapter 3.1 • Standard Ten • English • Poet: Nissim Ezekiel
Paraphrase of the Poem
The speaker remembers the night his mother was stung by a scorpion. The scorpion had hidden beneath a sack of rice to escape the rain.
The neighbours gather like a swarm and try to “paralyse” the scorpion, believing that as it moves, the poison moves through the mother’s blood. They search everywhere with candles and lanterns, but cannot find it.
Many remedies are tried but none ease her pain. The speaker, a young boy, watches helplessly. His father, a sceptic and rationalist, tries powders, mixtures, herbs and hybrids, and even pours paraffin on the bitten toe and sets it alight. A holy man chants to tame the poison.
After twenty hours the poison loses its sting and the mother is well again. Her love for her children shows when she thanks God that the scorpion picked on her and spared her children.
Meanings
| Word | Meaning |
|---|---|
| diabolic | having the qualities of the devil; wicked |
| paralyse | to stop an activity |
| diminished | lessened; reduced |
| groaning | a mournful sound conveying pain or grief |
| sceptic | one who doubts general beliefs |
| rationalist | a person who values reason and knowledge over opinion and belief |
| incantation | the chanting of words that claim to have magical power |
Warming Up!
| Superstition | Implication |
|---|---|
| (i) Smashing a mirror | Brings seven years of bad luck. |
| (ii) A cat crossing your path | Causes you to get delayed. |
| (iii) Friday the 13th | Is a bad day to do anything; the number is considered ominous. |
| (iv) Going outside during an eclipse | Causes health problems. |
- (1) How they attack? They sting their victim and inject venom into its body.
- (2) Where they live? In deserts, holes, and wherever there are heaps of rubbish or garbage.
- (3) Their appearance: They have eight legs, a pair of grasping pedipalps, and a narrow, segmented tail carried in a forward curve over the back, ending in a venomous stinger.
- (4) Any more information: They survive harsh climates by slowing their metabolism. They are associated with lobsters, spiders and snakes. Their sting is poisonous and can kill.
In Between the Poem
English Workshop
| Lines | What is happening? |
|---|---|
| 1–7 | The scorpion comes into the home to escape the rain and stings the poet’s mother. |
| 8–33 | These lines deal with the neighbours who came to help. They searched for the scorpion but could not find it. They clicked their tongues and made wishes that the mother’s suffering would decrease and the poison would purify her. |
| 34–48 | These lines deal with the family: the mother twisting and groaning in pain, the father trying every method of treatment (powder, mixture, herb, hybrid, paraffin on the bitten toe), the child watching helplessly, and the holy man performing rites to tame the poison. |
- (i) To crawl beneath the sack of rice
- (ii) The peasants came like swarms of flies
- (iii) with candles and lanterns
- (iv) shadows on the mud-baked walls
| Timid | Dangerous |
|---|---|
| (1) hides beneath a sack of rice (2) Risking the rain, the scorpion comes back | (i) Diabolic, parts with the poison (ii) As the scorpion moved, the poison in Mother’s blood moved |
| The Images | What images suggest |
|---|---|
| They came like swarms of flies. | Many people came, having learnt about the sting, to show support, offer prayers and help in the only way they could. |
| They buzzed the name of God. | The name of God was spoken by so many people that it sounded incomprehensible, like the buzzing of insects when many talk at once. |
| They threw giant scorpion shadows on the mud-baked walls. | It shows how far the scorpion had intruded on the lives of the people; the scorpion is what they see all around them. |
| They clicked their tongues. | They wanted to sympathise with the family and to listen for the movement of the scorpion and the spreading venom. |
- 1. The child is afraid but admires — (c) the bravery of his mother
- 2. His father and the villagers panic and hastily suggest — (c) religious remedies to help
- 3. The poet seems to see the villagers as impractical and almost irritating, which suggests that — (b) the poet is critical of religion
- 4. This is a ___ poem as it tells a story — (c) narrative
- 5. Using the first person gives the feeling that it is told from — (a) personal experience
- 6. ‘The scorpion picked on me. And spared my children’ depicts — (c) selfless and unconditional love of mother
- 7. The poem has no rhyme scheme, so it is a perfect example of — (c) Free verse
- 8. The poem is titled ‘Night of the Scorpion’ because, for the major part of the poem — (b) the scorpion is the victor
- 9. The peasants chant the name of God to — (a) nullify the stinging experience
- 10. The click of tongues reflects their ___ to the predicament — (b) collective response
| Stages | Evidence (lines from the poem) |
|---|---|
| (a) the attempts by the peasants to help alleviate the mother’s pain | (i) may your suffering decrease, the misfortunes of your next birth (ii) may the sum of all evil balanced in this unreal world against the sum of good become diminished by your pain |
| (b) the action of these same peasants to kill the scorpion | (i) with candles and lanterns they searched for him (ii) he was not found |
| (c) the reaction of the rational father | my father sceptic, rationalist, trying every curse and blessing, powder, mixture, herb and hybrid |
| (d) the various superstitions versus the ‘scientific’ | (i) I watched the holy man perform his rites to tame the poison with an incantation (ii) after twenty hours it lost its sting |
| (e) evil versus good | (i) the peasants buzzed the name of God a hundred times to paralyse the evil one (ii) may the sum of all evil … become diminished by your pain |
| Father | Mother |
|---|---|
| (i) Sceptic and rational — “my father, sceptic, rationalist” (ii) Caring and determined — tried powder, mixture, herb and hybrid (iii) Desperate to help — poured paraffin on the toe and lit it |
(i) Strong, bearing great pain — twisted and groaned, yet survived (ii) Selfless, with unconditional love for her children — thanked God the scorpion picked on her and spared her children |
Metaphor: throwing giant shadows on half baked walls
Onomatopoeia: buzzed the name of God, clicked their tongues
| Visual imagery | Tactile imagery (touch) | Sound imagery | Internal sensations, feelings and emotions |
|---|---|---|---|
| (1) Scorpion crawling beneath a sack of rice | (1) I watched the flame feeding on my mother | (1) Buzzed the name of God | (1) Fear |
| (2) More candles, more lanterns | (2) Father pouring paraffin on the toe | (2) They clicked their tongues | (2) Groaning |
| (3) Peasants came … with candles and with lanterns | (3) Flashed the diabolic tail in the dark room | (3) The peasants came like swarms of flies | (3) Suffering |
